Excerpt
Breaking His Spell
Foster Bridget Cassidy © 2019
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Chapter One
True love. There were no other words in all the world as deceitful as those.
In my youth, I had believed.
I sought to find that one person to complete me. As a newly trained magician, the Alsa Alma sent me to tutor the third youngest prince of the Farlerotna Kingdom. In the palace, I watched Prince Vulten grow. I was his constant companion in study and in play. The prince had a devious mind, and we spent hours thinking of ways to trick his older siblings.
And on the day he turned eighteen he’d confessed his love for me. Shocking, to say the least, because I’d come to love him too.
True love. Or so I thought. Except, how could anyone truly, irrevocably love an immortal?
For the early years, we were happy. We took trips to foreign nations. We hosted lords and ladies. We played tricks on his siblings, even Rillik, who had taken the crown by then.
But as the years stretched and Vulten began to age, the love in his eyes lessened and faded, replaced by envy and jealousy. As an immortal Alma, my magic kept my body youthful.
He’d died, cursing my name.
For decades, I mourned. Not just the loss of his life, but the loss of his love.
“That,” Alma Carishina said at the end of my monologue, “is why you don’t have relations with mortals.” She leaned forward, her chin resting on her palm. She’d magicked her hair green, and the curls appeared serpentine, a gorgon with her snakes.
“No,” I countered, “that’s why you don’t have any relationships with anyone. If love could not last for eighty years with a mortal, how could it last forever with an immortal? It’s not possible.”
“And so,” Alma Franik added with a toothy grin, “you’ve turned into a grumpy old man at the tender age of two hundred.”
“I’m a hundred and ninety-five,” I fumed. “And I’m not grumpy. I don’t see the point in romance. There’s no such thing as true love.”
“I heard,” Franik stage whispered to Carishina, “he moped in the Farlerotna Palace for a hundred years before they asked for him to be taken away.”
Carishina laughed and the red in my cheeks was not all anger. Maybe I had moped, but my broken heart was understandable. I’d lost my lover, and at the same time, my childish ideas of the world. It had wounded me. I needed to reflect and get a grip on my life.
Had I really been there a hundred years? Rillik’s granddaughter—Simmone—had assumed the throne. How long had I wandered those halls, haunting them like a ghost? It couldn’t have been more than forty or fifty.
“The Alsa Alma had to fetch Klint himself,” Franik concluded with a smug smile.
“Ha-ha,” I told him sourly. “I’m not sure you have room to talk, Franik, as you’ve never even been sent outside these walls. What was it the Alsa Alma said? You ‘lacked any and all ambition’?”
Carishina snorted and Franik glowered. “As if I wanted to mingle with the mortals,” he said, drawing himself up. “I don’t ever want to get mixed up in their insignificant affairs.”
I allowed myself a small grin as Franik directed the conversation onto a new topic.
At times, I still missed Vulten. Our connection had been the one real thing in my life. As a wizard, I used unexplained solutions, backward thinking, magicking anything into reality. But with Vulten, the emotions had seemed more than magic. Better than magic.
At least I’d learned my lesson young. The pain prepared me for my lonely future.
The afternoon light shone in through the stained-glass windows, throwing splashes of color around the room. I adored the place, my favorite in the Alma Palace, a mixture of library and meditation room. Most of the time, no occupants filled the tables. Or on the occasions when they did, other magicians knew enough to leave you to your thoughts. Well, not today. Franik and Carishina had bombarded me with questions the moment I walked in.
They were young—Franik just turned ninety, and Carishina was a mere forty-six. Of course, they were curious about the gossip around the palace, and my experience in Farlerotna continuously made the rounds. Plus, many of the older practitioners didn’t have the time or inclination for dealing with the young ones. Apparently my years in the mortal world had tempered my patience.
“I hope I get an assignment soon,” Carishina said. “I’m ready to travel and see something besides these Mylforsaken windows.” The curse using the goddess’s name sounded odd in her cheerful voice.
“They won’t let you out for a least another twenty years,” I told her.
“Why not? I heard you were sent out at forty-five. I’m older now.”
I shrugged. “The world’s a much more dangerous place now, even to a trained Alma. Dark wizards are the least of our concerns.”
Her lips puckered in displeasure. “I heard there’s a prince in Terius who’s fallen under an evil spell. I want to be the one to rescue him.”
“What did I say about mixing with royalty?” I asked, exasperated. What was the point in telling them my tragic past if they didn’t heed my warnings?
“Oh, Klint,” she said fondly, reaching out to grip my hand. “Just because a relationship didn’t work for you doesn’t mean it won’t work for everybody. Or, maybe your prince was an ass who really didn’t love you at all.”
My mouth fell open. So did Franik’s. Carishina casually went on smiling at me, unaware of how tactless her words had been.
“Klint,” called a voice from behind me. I turned in my seat. Alma Peter leaned through the doorway. “The Alsa Alma would like to speak to you.”
I wrinkled my nose. It’d been awhile since I’d been summoned by the old man. After he’d come to Farlerotna and informed me I was creeping out the current royals, I’d kept my distance. Now, I hoped he had good news for me.
Diverse Reader –
This author broke my heart in the first page! And that folks is how you get me to care and invest in a character.
The sadness in the simple telling of a past heartbreak was how we are introduced to one of the main characters, Alma Klint. (Alma being a magician that’s been called to train at the Alma Palace by a mark that appears on the child at some point). He’s a grumpy man of 200, surrounded by a few magicians of considerable younger ages. Even with his walls up against love and overall grumpy feel, it was easy to find him endearing. The author gave him friendships that softened him and showed his vulnerabilities. They fleshed him and really all the characters well enough that their voices were easy to spot.
I didn’t know for a good portion who the other love interest was going to be because the author did such a good job of making me doubt that the guy I thought it was was good! I watched and analyzed his every move and word. I actually loved that the story wasn’t predictable in its telling, that the author made me question what and who was good or bad. And the bad guy? Yeah, didn’t see that one coming.
Overall, I loved the pace, the writing, and all of the characters. The magic was simple but weaves into the story so it felt a part of the characters. Short read, about 2.5-3 hours, but worth the escape into the authors world!
Elaine White –
** I WAS GIVEN THIS BOOK FOR MY READING PLEASURE **
Copy received through Netgalley
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Breaking His Spell by Foster Bridget Cassidy
★★★★★
147 Pages
POV: 1st person, one character
Content Warning: kissing without consent (Sleeping Beauty style)
Finally! I’m so relieved. I’ve had a string of books lately that just weren’t for me and this one broke the curse! I’m so thrilled, because I was really looking forward to reading it and it turned out to be everything I hoped it would be.
Funny. Light-hearted. Sweet. Cute. It was all those things and more. Combining some of my favourite genres together – royalty, fantasy, and a quest – I got sucked into this story of true love, magic and loyalty.
In the quest for true love, Prince Yarling makes a vital miscalculation that results in him being accidentally woken from a Sleeping Beauty curse – meant to be broken by true love’s kiss – by the wrong man! I absolutely loved the idea and how everyone bar the POV character, Klint, had the potential to be a dark mage or working against the Prince. There was so much potential for conspiracy and it was fun to follow the trail to find out what threats were true and what were imagined.
I loved Klint and Yarling equally. Klint was amazing right from the start – this grouchy old soul in a relatively young body of an immortal – while Yarling took a while to warm up to, on purpose. I loved how they were forced together, by this silly, almost childish plan to make Antonio jealousy. Yet, the very childishness was charming, because it only went to show little experience these people had in love and romance. And how hesitant Klint was to repeat the mistakes of the past, as he believed them.
Overall, I really loved it. I loved the characters, the world building, and the way it all came together. It was fun, but clever as well; light but with a romantic twist, and it had a completely satisfying ending that made my heart happy. I’d read more by the author and more of this world, and these characters, in a heartbeat.
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Favourite Quotes
“Yarling took a step back and I wanted to cry out in protest. The heat of him had been so welcomed. Now I felt cold as a sunless, winter day.”